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    gus

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    The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 6:59 PM (permalink)
    This has got to be one of the best things I've heard in my life....

    Download song here...

    Declaration of my feelings for you
    Elaboration on those feelings
    Description of how long these feelings have existed
    Belief that no one else could feel the same as I
    Reminiscence of the pleasant times we shared
    And our relationship's perfection
    Recounting of the steps that led to our love's dissolution
    Mostly involving my unfaithfulness and lies
    Penitent admission of wrongdoing
    Discovery of the depth of my affection
    Regret over the lateness of my epiphany

    Title of the song
    Naïve expression of love
    Reluctance to accept that you are gone
    Request to turn back time
    And rectify my wrongs
    Repetition of the title of the song

    Enumeration of my various transgressive actions
    Of insufficient motivation
    Realization that these actions led to your departure
    And my resultant lack of sleep and appetite
    Renunciation of my past insensitive behavior
    Promise of my reformation
    Reassurance that you still are foremost in my thoughts now
    Need for instructions how to gain your trust again
    Request for reconciliation
    Listing of the numerous tasks that I'd perform
    Of physical and emotional compensation

    Title of the song
    Naïve expression of love
    Reluctance to accept that you are gone
    Request to turn back time
    And rectify my wrongs
    Repetition of the title of the song

    Acknowledgment that I acted foolishly
    Increasingly desperate pleas for your return
    Sorrow for my infidelity
    Vain hope that my sins are forgivable
    Appeal for one more opportunity
    Drop to my knees to elicit crowd response
    Prayers to my chosen deity
    Modulation and I hold a high note...

    Title of the song
    Naïve expression of love
    Reluctance to accept that you are gone
    Request to turn back time
    And rectify my wrongs
    Repetition of the title of the song
     
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      AstronautEd

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      RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 7:28 PM (permalink)
      Ooohhhhhhh dude... Thank you SO much.

      I LOVE this group. I'm a sucker for a cappella music to begin with, and the way these guys write and perform just takes it all to another level. LOVE it!!!
      "Either he's dead or my watch has stopped." -Groucho Marx

      http://www.smockrock.com
      http://www.astronautdown.com
       
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        Backlash

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        RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 7:30 PM (permalink)
        not my kind of genre but i give them props for using that kind of vocabulary
         
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          Brood

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          RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 7:33 PM (permalink)
          This is absolutely fantastic. Thank you so much for posting this.
           
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            chorus of one

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            RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 7:49 PM (permalink)
            That is really very cool, thanks!
             
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              IngeVea

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              RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 8:10 PM (permalink)
              LOL, thats very cool, love the bridge. Thanks gus dude.
              EL JARDIN DEL SILENCIO
              EN RADIO UNIVERSIDAD, PROGRAMA DE RADIO DE METAL, DOMINGOS DE 7:00PM A 8:00PM PT MEXICALI 104.1 FM, TIJUANA 1630 AM, ENSENADA 95.5 FM
               
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                gus

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                RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 9:59 PM (permalink)
                Glad you guys liked it... yeah IngeVea... I love the bridge too..
                 
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                  Murasamee

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                  RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 10:07 PM (permalink)
                  Wow. Its really great! I started kinda laughing when the guy was like "Modulation and I hold a high note..." it was like a step by step process, very cool. Thanks gus, for providing us pictures of your lovely wife and this song.


                  Wow...I just noticed how well this song was written!

                  ..::Peace. Love. Harmony. Minor 3rds::..
                   
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                    gus

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                    RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 10:14 PM (permalink)

                    ORIGINAL: Murasamee

                    Wow. Its really great! I started kinda laughing when the guy was like "Modulation and I hold a high note..." it was like a step by step process, very cool. Thanks gus, for providing us pictures of your lovely wife and this song.


                    Wow...I just noticed how well this song was written!




                    ROTFLMAO!!! Just don't tell her she's on the forum... last time I showed her pic she was a bit pissed...

                    The "Modulation and I hold a high note..." just kills me, it's just great.
                     
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                      Thunder1

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                      RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 10:24 PM (permalink)
                      Great song. I had almost forgotten about that song. I remember hearing it years ago on the Bob and Tom radio show and laughing my ass off. Great stuff.
                       
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                        Naigewron

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                        RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 10:57 PM (permalink)
                        Oh yes, it rules! I've had it on my mp3 player for ages, and it cracks me up every time it comes on!

                         
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                          Medusa

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                          RE: The love song formula Sunday, January 30, 2005 11:55 PM (permalink)
                          Just in time for Valentine's Day! I love it, it's right up there with "If you love somebody better set them on Fire"
                          .
                           
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                            Cloak

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                            RE: The love song formula Monday, January 31, 2005 12:25 AM (permalink)
                            For anybody wondering, this group is called DaVinci's Notebook.

                            I've known this song forever... I'm sure I posted about it at least once back in the last five years or so.

                            Funny thing is, when I saw the subject of this thread, I thought to myself I bet he's going to be talking about "Title of the Song." LOL.

                            For those interested, here's the FULL "title" of this song:

                            Title of the Song: A Rhetorical and Structural Analysis of Boy-Band Ballads from the Mid- to Late-1990s
                             
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                              gus

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                              RE: The love song formula Thursday, April 21, 2005 11:19 PM (permalink)
                              Rather than starting a new thread... I'm going to post this song on this one... this is another song from these guys, hope you like it:

                              Download it here...

                              Lyrics:

                              Whenever life gets you down
                              Keeps you wearing a frown
                              And the gravy train has left you behind
                              And when you're all out of hope
                              Down at the end of your rope
                              And nobody's there to throw you a line

                              If you ever get so low that you don't know which way to go
                              Come on and take a walk in my shoes
                              Never worry bout a thing
                              Got the world on a string
                              Cus I've got the cure for all of my blues (all of his blues)

                              I take a look at my enormous penis
                              And my troubles start a-meltin' away
                              I take a look at my enormous penis
                              And the happy times are coming to stay

                              I got a sing and a dance when I glance in my pants
                              And the feeling's like a sunshiney day
                              I take a look at my enormous pe-e-e-nis
                              And everything is goin' my way

                              (whistling)

                              (ad lib solo)

                              PE-E-NIS

                              (end ad lib solo)

                              Sing along at home, why don't you?
                              I take a look at my enormous penis (it's not that hard)
                              And my troubles start a-meltin' away
                              I take a look at my enormous penis
                              And the happy times are coming to stay

                              I got great big amounts in the place where it counts
                              And the feeling's like a sunshiney day
                              I take a look at my enormous penis
                              And everything is goin' my way
                              Everything is going' my way (hey, look at this goobers)
                              Everything is goin' my way (ay chihuahua!!)
                              Everything is goin' my waaaaaay
                              yummmm
                               
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                                gus

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                                RE: The love song formula Friday, April 22, 2005 12:07 AM (permalink)
                                *bump*
                                 
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                                  twowekphase

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                                  RE: The love song formula Friday, April 22, 2005 1:35 AM (permalink)
                                  wow, just wow. Awesome. That's all I got.
                                   
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                                    Ultravioelnt

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                                    RE: The love song formula Friday, April 22, 2005 6:35 AM (permalink)
                                    LMAO!
                                    The car is on fire,
                                    And there's no driver at the wheel.
                                    And the sewers are all muddied with a thousand lonely suicides,
                                    And a dark wind blows.
                                     
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